Any advice on how to improve these two factbooks?

[Jobenheim/Ryensohne]

https://www.nationstates.net/nation=jobenheim/detail=factbook/id=1754299
https://www.nationstates.net/nation=jobenheim/detail=factbook/id=1751834

 

[Sopo]

Honestly, they're both already far beyond my skillset, so good job!

 

[Jobenheim/Ryensohne]

Honestly, they're both already far beyond my skillset, so good job!

I have to attribute it down to copy and paste
But thanks!

 

[RogueEagle01]

your factbook looks pretty good man how's this look working on one it my self trying to improve it

https://www.nationstates.net/nation=bardonia_islands/detail=factbook/id=1815252